Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities or towns, only old people live in the countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
It has become more common for young residents from rural areas to immigrate to large industrialized cities. Thus, only senior citizens are seen to live in the countryside these days. The main problem this causes is fewer resource supply available for people living in rural areas and the most possible solution is the financial support from the government to the countryside.
The principal problem when young people move to major cities or towns is that their homeland will face a shortage of goods supply. This is because these individuals are the main workforce of their areas, and thus, there will be fewer people to sufficiently produce goods when they leave. Furthermore, senior citizens are too old to keep working with productivity to supply themselves. For example, the authority of Ben Tre has stated that this province is facing an extreme lack of rice after the majority of young population moved to Ho Chi Minh City for better job opportunities.
The most viable solution to this problem is the governmental support to help raise the income of people living in the countryside. In other words, states can allocate a portion of national money from cities’ taxpayers to rural areas to financially aid young workforce in rural areas. This will encourage the young to keep staying and working in their homeland. For instance, since the announcement of the government to provide farmers in Binh Duong province with a monthly package of two billion Vietnam Dongs in 2010, the number of emigrants from this province has vastly reduced.
In conclusion, the fact that many young ones choose to leave the countryside and move to cities brings the shortage of goods supply and the best way to address this issue is the financial aid from the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04778156997 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68988752191 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3988866271 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301131957965 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111489011772 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738646441716 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183058047232 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265648721262 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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