The tendency of human beings to copy one another is increasing in popularity. Is this a positive or negative development? What can be done about it?
In the contemporary era, due to technological advancements there is a tendency and an ease for people to follow each other. Despite some demerits, it has led to benefits to human civilization. This essay will discuss how it helped us in a good way and what steps can be taken against the cons.
Today, due to social media boom almost everyone on this planet can exchange their thoughts with everyone. There are many social media influencers who has tremendous followers through which they can advertise a plethora of the products and due to globalisation the products can be reached to anyone. For instance, Somya Gupta, who has 50 million followers on Instagram, always seen to sharing good tips and products regarding fashion and self care. As the tips are genuine, people trust her and copy her. This has bought an opportunity for her to gather ample amount of money at a very young age. In addition to it, if people are copying a person who is associated in activities like social welfare, fighting against climate change and working for greener environment, it can bring positiveness.
There are some demerits to this scenario that people need to be cautious while copying others, they must understand whom they are copying to. For example, if a person follows any of the celebrities and if they perform dangerous stunts in the movie, the person should not blindly follow and adopt all the them. There will always be the difference between reel life and real life. To counter such cases, awareness program should be run, especially for youngsters, through which they can be taught the difference of the state they are in and the state of whom they are following.
To conclude, there are of course some negative feedback of this development but they can be addressed easily. As a positive part of this, it can help for better human development and lead to a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...should not blindly follow and adopt all the them. There will always be the difference be...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
...such cases, awareness program should be run, especially for youngsters, through whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65252299621 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3011398948 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258538458454 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874863578611 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707995184566 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178434947565 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741546286613 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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