There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been argued for quite a long time that whether immigration should be popularized increasingly among people from different countries. Many of us want to immigrate to developed countries with families and want to settle down there permanently. People from different nations and cultures should be allowed completely to immigrate freely all over the world. In this essay, I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this international movement of people from different nations.
International organizations should allow people from different demographic regions to move from one region to another without any restriction. This would help many of us to know about other countries' culture and languages. The government bodies should create some processes to make it easy for them to immigrate. Australia, for instance, has very smooth process of immigration based on points system.
There are many benefits of international movements such as better job opportunities with advanced skillset and higher salaries. Moreover, they get to know about different people from different countries. Thus, people feel better there with these benefits rather than struggling in their home countries. One of my friend, for example, who was struggling in getting a good job in India, then he moved to Canada and got a better job with high wages.
Despite of these advantages, there are some disadvantages and discrimination is a one of them when we talk about immigration, which is faced by many people who recently moved abroad. This issue has been raised internationally using social media and other communication channels, but still it is there with no possible solution. In some countries, for instance, poor people are treated badly and discriminated by wealthy people.
To sum up, people from different backgrounds should be allowed to settle down in other countries without any restrictions on them, which could benefit them in achieving career goals and help them to know about various cultures. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of immigration such as discrimination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...uld help many of us to know about other countries culture and languages. The government b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05898463256 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6094812387 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.058823529 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270140800461 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911582294081 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546514067104 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156336460297 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369440192416 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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