These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them.
Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?
Families accompany an individual who goes to a foreign country for a job has more merits over its demerits.
The main obvious benefit is that the family relationship becomes weak by distance. It means that couples often end up in divorce as they cannot live separately for a long duration. Take an Indian newspaper, for example, a recent report from Times of India on Kerala states that women end up in divorce while they are working as a nurse in another country such as Dubai as the husband cannot stay alone in his native place for too long duration. As a result, when families are together abroad, there is no effect on family bondings.
Another pro point is that children, especially those who are young, can get the love of both parents. If we deprive them from an affection of one parent, then it can cause some mental effect on their mind. For instance, a recent report from the Ministry of Home Affairs on the mental health of young people shows that adolescent who stay away from one of parents has a psychological effect on his mind on a certain point of time in their life. Therefore, it is better to stay together and parents should consider their family first rather than earning more.
To conclude, families staying together have more pros than cons because the relation remain stronger among them and also daughters and sons get attention of both parents. Given that an individual who wants to go abroad for business or work should always consider taking family together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4918699187 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.92952154 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4325136574 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.111111111 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146779660836 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079625683117 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505629447 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100226722337 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308686511068 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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