Today, more and more students decide to move to a different country for higher studies.
Do you think that the benefits of this outweighs the problems?
In recent years many students are going to foreign countries for their education. I definitely believe that this trends’ benefits outweighs the issues.
This trend has got plenty of benefits to offer. The main advantage of flying overseas for further studies is that, ample of global opportunities and experiences. Opportunities like learning a complete new foreign language, getting a chance to shine globally by securing higher grades, exploring new areas and knowing the culture, and also making new international friends etc. Not to forget, ending up getting a chance to learn in one of the worlds renowned university, which would secure the future career. Besides, it makes the student very skillful by which he or she will be benefited in the job market. For instance, person becomes independent; take decisions without anyone’s help that helps to gain self-confidence, communication skills improve; while dealing on daily basis with the variety of people.
Nevertheless, this trend has associated with the issues too. There is a chance that some pupils may find it hard to understand the language, or even they could be homesick and lonely. However, this could be taken care by university programs, such as language course and/or counselling by a professional counselor respectively. Moreover, many would find it hard to cope up with the weather, nonetheless it is just the matter of time.
To sum up, although there are some inevitable problems considering the benefits which are associated with this trend, it is worthwhile going abroad for an education. This trend will never change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, as for, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35826771654 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97870227538 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3112252222 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143661543776 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536634946896 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462351040894 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104257130445 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588376377332 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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