Today more and more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult., such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits or disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
More and more people are eager to set places where conditions are harsh as their next travel destinations. However, the travel pattern brings both advantages and drawbacks to the tourists.
On one hand, people choosing places where conditions are difficult as their travel destination as they want to challenge themselves. It is widely accepted that a strong will and excellent physical fitness are a vital part for completing a trip like climbing Hymenia Mountain. People usually well-prepared before starting the trip. They do abundant exercises and control eating habits in order to get themselves prepared for extraordinary situations. Apart from all the hard works before the trip, they have to solve all the difficult situations during the journey. However, people consider all the preparation works and difficulties as the most cherished memories in their life. The feel accomplished and content after finishing the trip.
On the other hands, this mode of travelling raises certain disadvantages. The primary concern of this type of travel is sometimes can be life-threatening. Not everyone can adapt to such extreme conditions. There were few reports of death in recent years when people attempting to climb Hymenia Mountains. The reason of death was altitude sickness in response to not adapting scare oxygen supply in high altitude. Secondly, the budget is exaggerated. For example, the guided tours in Sahara Dessert which involve a local guide and gears can sometimes cost 1000 US dollars per person for a night. Some people may think it is unaffordable.
In sum, the advantage of choosing a travelling destination with harsh conditions is challenging and the disadvantages are life-threatening and expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5447761194 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13434612646 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1380489336 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13168323162 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457829008449 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528085696342 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084089644399 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488736971585 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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