Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? And what soultions can be done by individuals and the government?
Shortage of water has damaging consequences around the world. This essay would discuss that the main causes of this problem are overpopulation and industrialization, and the most viable solution to this concern is to put legal restrictions on the usage of water and to create awareness programs.
Cities are becoming overcrowded which leads to shortage of water resources on large scale. This is because, the demand of people to use water is constantly increasing in comparison to static reserved water and people often waste water in domestic activities. Furthermore, in many developing countries, many new textile and food industries are being set up and they pollute large proportion of useful water. That is to say, these industrial projects leads to significant amount of waste generation, which comprises of water as the main component. For example, in India, it was recently reported by the mass media that on an average 82 percent of water pollution was resulted from factories across the country.
The principle issue of water pollution can be addressed by setting legal limits on its usage. It is the prime responsibility of government to charge some fine or taxes from companies and organisations those who are involved in creating enormous shortage of water. In addition, schools can teach young generation to behave responsibily towards the pollution of water. By following this method, the adverse situation can be managed because children are more likely to teach their parents to utilize water in a responsible manner so that the future generations would no longer strive from water scarcity. For instance, the same initiative was taken in Germany where school learners were taught about the importance of water for mankind and this has created a significant reduction in the amount of water pollution.
In conclusion, it can be stated that the irresponsible consumption by the more number of men and women and the proliferation of industrialisation are main reasons for this global issue. It is therefore suggested that the state authorities should charge penalty from the firms for overutilization of water and present generation should be encourgaed to actively participate in conserving water resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...icant amount of waste generation, which comprises of water as the main component. For exampl...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible manner" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to teach their parents to utilize water in a responsible manner so that the future generations would no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33238636364 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07724749679 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565340909091 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.681078261 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.071428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229201346483 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821996067232 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372535929199 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143983364303 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234852329297 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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