In western countries, more and more people are choosing not to marry. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is very common in foreign country that people avoid to get marry, they prefer to live without marriage contract. This essay will discuss the positive side and negative side of this view.
On the one hand, not to marry have many advantages such as person do not have to take family responsibility. Once someone marry, so he or she have to take care of their partner as wife and husband. For example, many men in Canada do not agree to marry to their girlfriend because they would be obliged ethically to fulfil their partner requirement. Moreover, many do not want to take over their property and money to the partner after the divorce. In western country, it is a law that if someone do not want to life with other after marriage than all the money and property will be divided into both.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages associated with not to have marry. If one not marry, he or she will end up with lonely life. It seems in many cases that couples have very good understanding at the beginning of the relationship, eventually they may take separation because of not having any commitment. In addition to that, person cannot enjoy the life as parents. Couples who do not get marry have not kids. So they both have live without children.
In conclusion, the positive view of not getting marry is that one is not obliged to take care other and also would be free from the asset divided law after divorce. But the negative side is that they have to live lonely at end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid getting'.
Suggestion: avoid getting
...y common in foreign country that people avoid to get marry, they prefer to live without marr...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve side and negative side of this view. On the one hand, not to marry have many ...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'marries'.
Suggestion: marries
...ake family responsibility. Once someone marry, so he or she have to take care of thei...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ility. Once someone marry, so he or she have to take care of their partner as wife a...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...rn country, it is a law that if someone do not want to life with other after marri...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'married'.
Suggestion: married
...sadvantages associated with not to have marry. If one not marry, he or she will end u...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that they have to live lonely at end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41100585763 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3319999795 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0723963344927 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287178392802 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359918006141 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509580708961 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431444445994 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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