What are the pros and cons for children
watching television
TV nowadays has become very essential technology for most of individuals especially children. However, this kind of innovation is like everything has positive and negative effects on users lives. this essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV by children and teenagers before coming to a conclusion.
Firstly, there is no doubt that a plethora of tv channels provided educational programs. For instance, National children Geographic, this channel is specialized for under 16 years old, and it provides lots of documentary movies in extremely attractive way, in terms of catching young watchers’s attention. this great channel, played a fundamental role in enhancing and expanding young generation knowledge. Secondly, children tv programs may participate in obtaining plenty of skills. For example, the famous cartoon program “Detective Conan” helped children to acquire some skills like analysis which might not found at their curriculum. Moreover, some other interactive children contest programs such like Abo El-Horoof, a popular Egyptian program, aims to allow different children to work and play together in order to solve some tricky tasks. such programs helped children a lot to evolve their skills such like collaboration.
On the other hand, there are some negative impacts on children who are watching tv. First of all, not all TV channels are suitable for children. To illustrate, there are various tv channels that’s displaying some violent or hot scenes, which’s really not good to be viewed by children. Since it has very dangerous influence on their attitude which might make them more aggressive. Second of all, there are massive number of invaluable ads that's targeting children. GameBoy one of many examples of it, had been publishing very attractive advertisements to lure lots of children to purchase their expensive and not useful games. such companies are unfortunately, abusing their leverage to add more financial pressure on children’s families. Finally, watching tv might seriously interfere with children health. Obesity is a common disadvantage example of watching tv, as it leads children to stuck on their seats watching their programs and having no physical activities which’s exacerbate such problem.
In conclusion, tv is like any technology might be helpful and extremely harmful for children depend on their usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65384615385 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07692307692 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7402396228 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0414293838403 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161126874755 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02870217317 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369982233324 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158941060718 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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