What makes someone a friend and what makes them your best friend?
It goes without saying people like to live in social groups, so they need someone to make friendship. Where do relationships come from and which do relationships will be changed to great ones? In this essay, ways of making someone a friend will be discussed, and reasons of being stronger relationship will be mentioned.
Many years ago, people found their friends according to their location, skin colour, and language. Nowadays people are looking forward friends according to their interest, behaviour, and commons. Although some factors come from the past, but almost many of them are changed in the computer age. For example, you can make a call to your friend across the globe without any trouble. I am not sure but people who have lots in common can enter to a friendship relation such as students in schools or colleagues in a work-place.
Furthermore, these relationships can be stronger during the time. In the other words, old friends are more near and dear to us. Well-weather friends lost touch you by the time, and just your close friends like a second family stay with you, so time has an important role in a friendship improvement. Moreover, common memories, hobbies, and even secrets can be helpful to make your mate as a close friend and you will have a shoulder to cry on.
Finally, people are looking for friends because they are a social creature, and they are finding their friends by their interests, commons, and behaviours. Sometimes a relationship goes stronger during years, and it usually makes our best friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, look, moreover, second, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93846153846 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69884919591 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2278242061 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296365703256 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103531750664 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751099066171 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185880643996 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341333202581 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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