When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn.
A great number of people contemplate their salary as the salient feature of their Job; however, many others possess the notion that the kind of job they do holds more importance than what so ever. In my view, a job should have ethical demands and needs to be passion-oriented, otherwise, it would be futile to work merely for wages. So these two traits of a job should be considered as the most valuable aspects of a career.
Let us examine why passion is a noticeable part of our job life. In fact, it acts like the fuel that drives people to withstand the caustic side of their job life. Nevertheless, people chose a job that is nowhere connected with their likings, and fall into a victim of depression. On the other hand, if we torch upon successful persons’ stories, we would find that almost all of them have been in the career that they were passionate about. Suppose Bill Gates or Steve Jobs, both of them were tech enthusiasts, and therefore took technology as the means of their career.
Besides, a job also needs to be ethical where people need to find the aspect of doing something for humanity. In addition to that, working for the people not only will provide mental satisfaction but also will strengthen the purpose of the job life; thereafter, make people more recognizable in the society they belong to. Take Mother Theresa or Nelson Mandala, for an example; both of them are highly praiseworthy for their works for humanity.
To reiterate, salary is important for a standard living; however, if people do not feel any attachment with their works; certainly, they will feel exhausted later in their life, and will be suppressed by the undue pressure that could have been avoided if they had passion and ethical content in their job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, in fact, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77124183007 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62649968146 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1176150796 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242984795284 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092452114008 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584483697376 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160008950765 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059327915051 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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