People worry our lives would be fundamentally transformed by automation technology which is advancing at a staggering speed. In this essay, I would compare the pros and cons regarding to automation technology.
It is generally recognised that machines are productive than human labours. Global construction productivity had been increased a lot by using cutting-edge technology. A brick wall could be built by robotics three times shorter than traditional workers in terms of duration. Moreover, lower production errors benefit people to enjoy better quality products. A common fact could be proved this is that machine adoption in clothing manufacturing. Also, adopting automation technology could off human's hand from massive physical works which indirectly linked with healthiness.
On the hand, some people claim that the more machines used the more unemployed labour raised. Since more and more traditional occupation overtaken by automation machines, people starts to worry the surplus employment labour could impair the global economics and social safety. However, automation technology also generates new job opportunities for people which turns out the opinion mentioned above is over-concerned. For example, an unemployed construction worker could transform into a machinery technician by taking relevant training.
In conclusion, I believe new technology could bring us more convenience by improving the productivity and quality of products. Although people may feel uncomfortable in the transition stage, automation technology would promote civil development in the long run.
- Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 90
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...civil development in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97826086957 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1528335142 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65652173913 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5992721472 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0557970417848 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206931817417 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216353125223 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341016610892 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00973634330871 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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