Will music CD become obsolete, do you agree or disagree?
For most people, music CD is archaic product because it is disappearing in the market. I tend to disagree this view and will discuss it in this essay.
It is popular to listen music over mobile these days. The drawback of online music app or software is people have to choose songs in advanced, in the meanwhile, it is hard to find the suitable musics if the memories limited people. Apart from that, people possess internet all the time. First and foremost,
CD player remains part of vehicle facility nowadays, with enough petrol, people can play music CD in car continuously in comparison of battery of smart phone. Another significant argument in favor is that manually pick up play music CD so much better than systematic random in app or software because people choose it from selected CDs not recommended by machine. Last but not least, holding an album is like to see an art in hands. To check every pages of album lyrics book, people can feel effort that artist put on. It is the only method people would like to get in touch with the music if some people do not have phone.
It is easy to subscribe a service to enjoy the unlimited musics. Anytime and anywhere, the only movement people need is to press virtual button, with mobile data, download is not necessary. The price also will be decreased in the future after monster company join this market as well as benefit the poverty area if the music app allowed it become phone-based.
In conclusion, it is true that CD is getting rare in contemporary world but still quite useful in someplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69565217391 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42500138042 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5385284426 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203964250293 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600576033957 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488763516942 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104410424513 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428818559425 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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