Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over Recent years , the number of pregnant women choose abortion instead of having birth has been risen by an alarming speed which cause a lot of concerns . While some people argue that government should ban it by law , I believe that it should be legal.
To begin, there are several reasons why people think abortion must be prohibited . Firstly, abortion brings damaging influences on women's health which include both physical and mental issues . There are massive women who did abortion before suffering from wide ranges of painful sick , some of them even lose the chance to be a mother again. In addition, in some developing countries , people usually choose abortion because they value male children more As a result , there are more males than females which break the balance of society .
On the other hand , I think abortion allows women to have right to decide when they want to have children in relation to their ages , financial stability and relationship stability . If a women had to rear a baby when she is young or in poor financial situation , both her and her baby would struggle a lot in their later life . In addition, raising a baby is not an easy task which need to invest huge money and energy . it will be better to stop proganany instead of letting a fetus grows into a child who live in a destructive environment without love .
In conclusion, abortion is a moral argument more than a legal problem. Women should decide this by themselves , at the same time, government can enhance the education to reduce the unnecessary abortion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85283018868 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53654938699 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2183056779 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170678391743 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06672171174 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544387940763 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104903712792 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471265152093 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.