Write a five-paragraph essay in which you classify the types of friends you have.
In life, I come across many people and some of them make friends with me. For me, there are three the types of friends, which are acquaintances, online friends and best friends. They are playing different roles in my life. And all have their special meaning to me.
The first type of friends is simply acquaintances whom I have met but don’t know well. I can meet these type of friends in anywhere such as at work, on the bus, in school, … They can be classmates, school friends or club friends. Some become a friend at some point. Others whom I don’t remember even their face. These friends are pretty good but I often only meet them in case of need. So, we don’t talk or share much.
Another type of friends is online friends whom I only know through social network such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter… When they make a strong impression on me, I will send them a friend request. After, we start to talk. I’m generally more comfortable and find easier to express my opinions and share about myself online by typing than talking. However, These friends also bring to risk. Because, I have never met some of these friends face to face. I don’t know exactly their real name and their family history.
The best important type of friend is best friend who have a special situation more than other friends in my life. My best friends have both girl and boy. They usually listen and understand me. These friends give me a hand to overcome difficulty, stand up for me and keep my secret close. So, I completely trust them. We share everything together. It’s both happiness and sadness. We study, play and grew up together. I strong believe that they will always be there for me. They aren’t perfect, but it’s sure that my best friends will never do anything to hurt me.
In conclusion, I have three the type of friends. The first is acquaintances. The second is online friends. The last is best friends. They are different but they are important in my life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... me, I will send them a friend request. After, we start to talk. I’m generally more c...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ever, These friends also bring to risk. Because, I have never met some of these friends...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...Because, I have never met some of these friends face to face. I don’t know exactly thei...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...dy, play and grew up together. I strong believe that they will always be there for me. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...intances. The second is online friends. The last is best friends. They are differen...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62889518414 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38034185223 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490084985836 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9998959416 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.7096774194 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3870967742 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.29032258065 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 8.67935871743 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166411337826 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448399894871 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538036867518 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107827800761 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264382563451 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.39 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... me, I will send them a friend request. After, we start to talk. I’m generally more c...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ever, These friends also bring to risk. Because, I have never met some of these friends...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...Because, I have never met some of these friends face to face. I don’t know exactly thei...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...dy, play and grew up together. I strong believe that they will always be there for me. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...intances. The second is online friends. The last is best friends. They are differen...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62889518414 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38034185223 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490084985836 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9998959416 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.7096774194 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3870967742 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.29032258065 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 8.67935871743 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166411337826 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448399894871 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538036867518 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107827800761 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264382563451 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.39 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.