You see a request for articles in a magazine: We invite you to write about: The Future of Travel. In what ways do you think travel will be different in the future? In what ways might it still be the same? The writer of the best article will win a prize! Write your article.
Recently a company named "SpaceX" set a milestone by launching re-usable rocket launchers , which were considered impossible till now. Now the company plans to start commercial transport to Mars that will set an unprecedented milestone in the history of mankind. Two thousand years back, fastest way of transport available to humans was a horse cart. Almost a hundred years , Wright brothers flew the first aeroplane and opened up a whole new dimension for transporting humans from one point to another point.
In just a hundred years we have come a long way and still the trend continues. Japan has started using magnetic trains, which are much faster than the conventional trains. Governments across the globe are investing heavily to set up magnetic train infrastructure in their own countries.
Plans have been made to create airways for fully automated and unmanned drones that offer pick and drop service to customers. They have their own designated routes in air which minimise the risk of collisions and take lesser time than road transport and are cheaper than airplanes. They will be available in public domain soon.
Moreover, if scientists are able to fullly capture the power of quantam physics, teleportation will be possible which will make travelling at the speed of light across anywhere in the world very easy.
As the mode of transportation becomes faster, the cost of travel increases. Now choosing the means of travel depends on factors like time and money. More reliable, less time consuming and faster option will be expensive than a slower transport. Travelling by car between two cities will always be slower but cheaper, so it depends on the end users to choose for their own convenience.
In conclusion, some of the methods of travelling will remain the same in future but others will be replaced by faster and cheapers methods of transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... by launching re-usable rocket launchers , which were considered impossible till n...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the fastest'.
Suggestion: , the fastest
...tory of mankind. Two thousand years back, fastest way of transport available to humans wa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...was a horse cart. Almost a hundred years , Wright brothers flew the first aeroplan...
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Line 1, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...humans from one point to another point. In just a hundred years we have come a l...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...eir own convenience. In conclusion, some of the methods of travelling will remain the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16286644951 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82768645448 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6198734854 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17729975532 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592808793267 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570702139951 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998608750943 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602569121697 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.