You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Dressing sense depicts the major part of your personality traits and its developement .Lot of the business related things depends on your dressing style It is often argued that some companies believe that their employees should dress smarly while others give preference to the quality of work . This essay will analyse the both sides of opinion .
Organisation where the client interaction role is high dressing style plays a major role in business conversion . First thing client will asses you before your product .Furthermore , First thing they will notice about you is the way u have dressed. The formal dressing code is the part of conduct in some organisations . For examples companies such Mckinsey , Bain & Company and others such type of companies , They asked their employees ,who are at level of consultant and above , to have a proper business suit .
As we all know startup world has changed the way how people work,grow and dressed. In most of the world famous startups such as UBER , WeWork ,OYO . They do give weightage to your dressing sense as they believe employees will work more efficiently when he/she is at their comfortable position . Not only this organisations such as google allow their employees to wear shorts in their offices . While some companies will allow their employees to wear casuals for one in a week just to remove monotonicity .
In conclusion , I believe that one should know which type of dressing is most suitable according to situation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66546078738 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.728373238 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273429058745 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914015277796 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628417609861 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166650630866 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686687176749 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.