You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from yo

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Climate change is one of the major cause of concern for human beings.It is often argued that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it .This essay disagrees with the above statement to the great extent. We need to opt for more sustainaible ways so that balance between the enviroment and our needs will be maintained.

Climate change is caused by increase in the earth temprature , melting of glaciers , rising pollution levels and ozone layer depletion . To deal with these type of issues we should adopt sustainaible ways to fulfill our demands. To illustrate this point lets take the example of goverment of India steps towards renewable sources of energy. More than 70 % of energy demands has met from renewable sources of energy such as Solar ,Wind and Hydro . Goverment has also float the mandate for all the vehicle manufacturers to start manufacturing BS VI engine vehicles. As BS VI engine can cause less harm to the enviroment.In addition, electric buses also started as means of public transport.

Citizens should also take some steps to prevent climate for example they should use car pooling while going to offices. Use of eco friendly vehicles should be promoted for short distances .Apart from that they should also plant more and more trees to curb the green house gases emissions.

In conclusion , Instead of living our lives with climate change we should move towards the adoption of eco friendly ways to save our enviroment .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e earth temprature , melting of glaciers , rising pollution levels and ozone layer...
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...llution levels and ozone layer depletion . To deal with these type of issues we sh...
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...enewable sources of energy such as Solar ,Wind and Hydro . Goverment has also floa...
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... of energy such as Solar ,Wind and Hydro . Goverment has also float the mandate fo...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
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Suggestion: floated
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...e can cause less harm to the enviroment.In addition, electric buses also started a...
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...s should be promoted for short distances .Apart from that they should also plant m...
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...should be promoted for short distances .Apart from that they should also plant more a...
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Suggestion: ,
... house gases emissions. In conclusion , Instead of living our lives with climat...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...eco friendly ways to save our enviroment .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98785425101 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57345434102 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5838456593 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261690924955 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940383048923 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846347276134 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173513370157 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080726251387 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...major cause of concern for human beings.It is often argued that instead of prevent...
^^
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nge we should find a way to live with it .This essay disagrees with the above stat...
^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...e we should find a way to live with it .This essay disagrees with the above statemen...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...used by increase in the earth temprature , melting of glaciers , rising pollution ...
^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e earth temprature , melting of glaciers , rising pollution levels and ozone layer...
^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...llution levels and ozone layer depletion . To deal with these type of issues we sh...
^^
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...enewable sources of energy such as Solar ,Wind and Hydro . Goverment has also floa...
^^
Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of energy such as Solar ,Wind and Hydro . Goverment has also float the mandate fo...
^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'floated'.
Suggestion: floated
...ar ,Wind and Hydro . Goverment has also float the mandate for all the vehicle manufac...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e can cause less harm to the enviroment.In addition, electric buses also started a...
^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s should be promoted for short distances .Apart from that they should also plant m...
^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apart
...should be promoted for short distances .Apart from that they should also plant more a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... house gases emissions. In conclusion , Instead of living our lives with climat...
^^
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eco friendly ways to save our enviroment .
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98785425101 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57345434102 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5838456593 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261690924955 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940383048923 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846347276134 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173513370157 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080726251387 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.