You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Modern advancements have made our lives much simpler. However, a recent study admits that youngsters who spend excessive hours in front of computer screens have a more destructive influence when compared to a constructive impact. I strongly agree that children need guidance and a supervised access to technology.
Millennials browse through a variety of search engines referring to the internet for information related to their homework and syllabus. This gives them the opportunity to access a number of topics simultaneously. This may seem quick and easy but it is hindering the pupils from visiting the library or reading books.
Moreover, children are getting accustomed to sedentary activities. There has been an exponential increase in the number of obese children who suffer health problems. Children prefer to engage in computer games and watch adulterated content they come across intentionally or unintentionally.
Parents must discipline their children and constraints on the time spent on computers. A supervised or limited access to the internet is necessary, as young individuals have tendencies to delve into distractions which are harmful to them.
In conclusion, I suggest that youngsters must be encouraged to take up outdoor activities and lead a well-balanced life. Educational institutions must inform their students about the merits and demerits of technology and their effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66981132075 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19574688435 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688679245283 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4861978102 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4615384615 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121067733021 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377131366205 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240284332123 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567346230296 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249048964524 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.