Young people are leaving country side to live in cities and towns leaving old people in countryside
what are the solutions.
Migration from small town to big cities is an old phenomenon followed since ages. Few believe that due to lack of employment opportunity, infrastructure, health care and life style has motivated youngsters to move to the cities, as a result they tend to leave their parents back at home which has led to several ethical and developmental issue in their home-grown town. In this essay will discuss the effects and possible solution of this ongoing trend.
There are several reasons which demands the youths to move to bigger cities leaving their parents back at home, even though they are well qualified and educated they find difficulties to get a good job in their home town, the main reason behind this is imbalance in rural and urban development. This is popularly known as brain drain, wherein intelligent people will be provided employment in bigger cities and their home town will loose such valuable human resource as a result the elderly parents lose their health and are away from children, who could have taken care of them in case of emergency. As per the recent survey conducted by BBC India, it is found that 75% of the graduated students from tier 2 cities will move to metro either for seeking employment or for further education. This has severe affect on not only home town but also on the bigger cities as they will be facing congestion, inflation and ultimately city leads to saturation stage because of over population.
This tendency can be curtailed by having a wider approach to the growth and development of all the sections of the country. The companies should be allowed to scatter across the region by balancing their presence in both backward and developed areas. This approach provides an opportunity to stay with their family and lead a happy life. As the requirement of moving to bigger city can be fulfilled locally, then there is very less scope of going to metros. Government has to bring in several policy to develop the small towns so that there is no reason to go to bigger cities for fulfillment of any purpose. The improved standard of living, healthcare facility, employment should be given utmost importance in rural areas to stop this.
In conclusion, this imbalance can be removed by Government through introducing several policies and reforms for the growth of under developed area by which youth can be retained in their home town with their parents. This will have a greater impact on all the sectors of the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... bigger cities and their home town will loose such valuable human resource as a resul...
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Line 3, column 808, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... for further education. This has severe affect on not only home town but also on the bigg...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun policy seems to be countable; consider using: 'several policies'.
Suggestion: several policies
...g to metros. Government has to bring in several policy to develop the small towns so that ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89047619048 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59827258157 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2806915316 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.933333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113030773327 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381975968267 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389471650516 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070639362417 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448015009799 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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