In 20 Years there will be Fewer Cars in Use
Many people wonder whether the number of cars on the street will increase as time passes. In my opinion, there will be more cars than it is now because the prices of the automobiles will be affordable for the majority of people and driving won't be a tough job any more. In this essay, I will elaborate on my reasons for holding this opinion.
First of all, in the future cars will probably be at prices which will fit everyone's budget. That is due to the fact that the salaries will rise and the prices of motorcars will drop simultaneously. For instance, when the cars first introduced to the society, there were the scarce amount of them in the world, and only the most affluent people could purchase them. However, now nearly every family owns a private car, which is not as unique as it was in the past. Therefore we can claim that this trend will also continue in the next decades.
Secondly, the developing world is rapidly urbanizing. Today people are more likely to live in an urban area. The apartment buildings that they live are usually far from the factories which necessitate a long trip every day. My friend Lee is a good example of such a person. Lee moved to a city last year to work in a steel plant and drives almost thirty kilometers from his home to the factory every day. All of his co-workers do the same, which is a pretty significant change compared to the past.
Lastly, as technology develops at the lightning speed, it is reasonable to propose that the use of self-driving automobiles will reach high levels. As a result, people will use cars more frequently because of its convenience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...is not as unique as it was in the past. Therefore we can claim that this trend will also ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57586206897 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50903006495 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8677282623 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291609041368 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837878314192 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845263954537 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173403528145 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882228026787 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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