Younger generation and their behavior towards parents must be taken into account when we are discussing the cultural changes in our society. The traits of a son or daughter play a significant role to build up a society. It has also been observed that their qualities over time have altered. I feel this way for following reasons which I will explore in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, children must show respect to their parents because they are the only person who work hard all around the clock to provide you a life brimming with joy, gratification and mirth; Sometimes they forget about their own needs just to pick the best thing for you .Hence, we should respect their thoughts ,believes and unconditional love for us. If they fail to satiate our whims ,we should understand their situation rather putting blame on them.
Furthermore, there is an another point which deserves few words. Recently, it has been observed that people who once believed in joint family now have propensity for nuclear family. Over the past few decades, children have become reluctant to carry out any liability for their parents.Therefore,they have been compelled to stay alone in their home or to stay in an old age home. Now the fact is that the behavior we conduct to them is being observed by our next generation; they are likely to emulate the same manners which is shameful and doleful.
By way of conclusion, based on the ideas mentioned above, I am of this opinion that children’s behavior towards their parents is the cornerstone of our society. Good behavior not only does make our society harmonious and congenial but also does make it a better place for our posterity.Therefore,in my opinion ,children must have punctilious sense of propriety when it comes to their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94019933555 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91846803259 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2656613309 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818527281801 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390476598671 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511448801832 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581764638102 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060324000634 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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