The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Having faithful friends in life is crucial and almost, each person wants to expand his or her relationships with others for achieving this aim. Although, some people claim that keeping old friends is essential for having a happy life, but I do not think so. In my view, being content in our rutin life has many sides. I feel this way for 3 main reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, we have earlier friends because of our past experiences; but we are alive and need to new events and subjects for making our life interesting. For example, I have several school friends in my life that really rely on them in certain times. But as a human, I need to have some new hobbies such as sports, musics, etc. Going to various club provides me new chance to make friend with people by different and some times opposite thoughts. I learn from them a lot by changing ideas with each other, we lough and spend happy times.
The second point is that however, ability for maintaining past friends is enjoy full, but it is not enough. I show my point with a true story about a thing that happened to me. 3 years ago, I got married. Until that time, my friends were single and we could spend much time for amazing and desirable activities; but after that times, as a mother, not only I needed to spend time with my lovely baby and family, but I also believed it is a terrific enjoyment that could not be comparable with other ones. As a result, it is not advisable limiting happiness to friends only.
Last but not least, people have various goals in their life, and concept of happiness is very conditional for them. Consider, for someones having money is desirable, but for others it is education, travelling, thinking, spending time with new friends or even being alone! Furthermore, having communication with old friends and in more general case friends are not determining reason for being happy in life.
In all, what drives somebody to assert that relationships with old friends is not more important factor for having a happy life, falls into 3 main categories including advantages of new friends, having other duties and perspectives in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... we have earlier friends because of our past experiences; but we are alive and need to new event...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...ability for maintaining past friends is enjoy full, but it is not enough. I show my p...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other duties and perspectives in life.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69010416667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50403185083 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5551568578 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.941176471 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280471418344 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920483036452 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592576087687 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168152836274 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316797089036 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.