The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Friends play an important part in our daily lives. They bring us joy, happiness, and support. Without doubt, no one is going to survive easily in this world if he or she does not have any friends. The statement that it is more important to have a long period of friendship with several friends compared to making new friends readily is a intriguing topic. I tend to agree with this statment, and I believe that a long-standing friendship is vital to everyone.
Friends are a necessary part for everyone in the world because friends are the most important companions in addition to families. Without friends, people might feel lonely and easily get lost when they are upset or depressed. For example, when I was abroad, my families were far away and my friends became the most important resources I resort to, especially when I encountered problems or setbacks. In such situations, I would invite my friends to a bar and get rid of the negative feelings simpily by drinking. It was so helpful that I was able to recover and get myself into either the study or job quickly. Therefore, friendship is pivotal and beneficial.
A long-standing friendship is much more important than a newly made friendship because old friends tend to be more faithful and supportive. Time is one of the best tool to test truth of friendship. For example, I have known my roommate, also my high school classmate, for more than 10 years. There is no doubt that I would rank him the number one if there is a ranking. We had conflicts and fights when we were young, but with time passing by, those experiences and memeories became an important attribute that turned our friendship much stronger, much genuine. In addition, he is willing to offer help for me whenever I need support. For instance, I was short of money because I did not find a job when I graduated. He lended me 10000 yuan without any hesitation to help me go thourgh the tough time. Therefore, compared to a new friendship, a long-standing friendship is much more helpful.
Admittedly, it is true that making new friends is also vital since every long-standing friendship was transformed from a novel one. Moreover, connecting with new friends are beneficial to broanden people's horizons and job hunting. For example, when I was in Singapore, I knew a lot of new friends from various countries, such as Thailand, India, Singapore, etc. They offered me fresh culture of their own hometowns and they also taught me their own languages and dialects. It was so much fun to be exposed to the culture shock and to learn the new languages. What's more, I secured my internship in Singapore because I knew a CEO who was a founder of a start-up at that time. I attended a networking session, and exchanged my thoughts with the CEO. After that, I received an interview invitation and further obtained the internship. Thus, making new friends can not only futher the knowledge, but benefit job seeking.
To sum up, even though making new friends is important to our life, a long-standing friendship is much more important because old friends tend to be true friends. Old friends are the friends who we can trust and they are also the friends who will stand up whenever we need helps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2665.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75892857143 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78909993437 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7823807496 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9677419355 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.064516129 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06451612903 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299469075798 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801761569066 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740809520409 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183240122529 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470577525707 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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