Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Human beings are always seeking ways to improve the quality of their life, and one of the most important parts of anyone’s life is observing ethical values. One of the vital elements of one’s life is being about the people who have a direct influence on their life. In this regard, some people are of the opinion that telling truth in any situation and condition is a crucial factor, while others believe that in the critical circumstances they are being allowed to tell lie. I certainly agree with first idea, that is, telling truth in any condition because of two substantial reasons that will be presented hereunder.
First, as we all know, reliability is one of the significant factor in everyone’s life, and for evaluating a person’s personality, honesty is the best way for evaluating a person. We live in the communities that people are always interacting with each other since the dawn until night. Therefore, being well-known as a liar person creates a great number of problems for that person. In starting a new business, most of the people do not have sufficient capital for starting. As a result, one way for prosperity is showing reliability and honesty that people are able to trust.
Second, no one can deny that, sometimes, telling truth have adverse consequences on people’s life. In my culture, there is a proverb that says “we must not tell lie, but we have not to tell a truth that may cause conflicts among people.” Based on this saying, we should avoid to tell some truths that may cause problems for people. We can use a strategy that some politician use in this situation. They easily conceal the truth by telling nothing. This approach, also, is more reliable way in the private life. Sometimes, in the marital situation, couples may face some problems in their life that its origin is exaggerating in being honest that causes guide their life to no way.
In conclusion, with considering all aforementioned reasons, we can conclude that being honest has some fruits in our life that we cannot find them in the other ways. In addition, when we are enforcing to tell lie, we are able to use other strategies such as concealing a truth for avoiding its bad side effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid telling'.
Suggestion: avoid telling
...eople.” Based on this saying, we should avoid to tell some truths that may cause problems for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82105263158 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67384997414 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4677982437 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202074748261 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727903206611 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643601760237 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123052360836 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694427183013 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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