Are enough public funds invested in social welfare?
Nowadays, everyone has access to social welfare equally. Some people say that social welfare is still not being realized completely because it is difficult to see by eye. However, I believe that current social welfare is enough and fair for everyone. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, we can access social welfare easily. Many people are supported by governments in order to be independent. Fundamental human rights are a strong point when it comes to considering social welfare, because Japan's law explicitly mentions that governments have to preserve everyone to realize fairness.
Second, educational systems are supported by social welfare in many countries because education is one of the most important elements in supporting a country. In Japan, for example, students have to attend school from elementary school through junior high school because these terms are obligations, and this responsibility rests with their parents. Mostly, educational fees are supported by social welfare.
Third, Japan has a problem with an aging society, and it will devastate the economy in the coming years. Therefore, the government actively supports people who have a baby. Since the turn of the century, many rules were created. For example, not only women, but also men, have the right to take a few months off from work to raise their child.
On a final note, governments should positively support society to realize fairness and for the country’s future. These are three reasons why I absolutely think social welfare is invested.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o preserve everyone to realize fairness. Second, educational systems are supporte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, third, for example, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71543072345 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.4135266381 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184193150947 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746350658205 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879853051517 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109606127971 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081421708461 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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