Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
No one can deny nowadays how complex life is, there are positive and negative aspects on the importance for young people to be able to organize and plan in these modern times. It is my firm belief that new generations do need to be more aware of all the possible benefits, which I will develop in the subsequent paragraphs: that a good way of organizing and planning can bring into their daily lives.
To begin with, the time has become an essential tool to measure our productivity. If young people were more conscious of the time they actually spend on things that should not require that much of an importance, they will have instead quality time to spend with their family or friends. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, now young people spending hours and hours on social media for instance. As a result, they are missing how essential is physical contact with beloved ones, by only maintaining relations via messages and not visiting their families or friends. For this reason, I think that if they put more limits on how much they use social media, they could also save more time to spend in a more quality way, connecting with other people, beyond the virtual world.
Secondly, some young people do not like following routines. Some of them do not like to be doing every day the same activities. Drawing from my own experience, having a routine can positively affect the way you can reach your goals. I knew for example that if I did not pursue a very strict routine on preparing for the TOEFL, I was not going to be able to succeed on the test. So I followed for a couple of months a plan that helped me get my goal and now I got in my dream University in Amsterdam. Moreover, not being specific on what you want to accomplish can diver you from the goals that you want to accomplish. It is certainly clear to see why some young people take longer than normal pursuing their goals, and this is basically because they lack of compromise on adjusting to a routine that helped them through the way to get there.
In the light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that planning and organizing are amazing tools if one wants to accomplish some goals, Not only for young people but in fact for everyone who wants to be consistent and successful in life.
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- history 80
- The decline of frogs populations 80
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57075471698 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51281425757 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535377358491 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4988377988 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274313665049 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832802759496 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781381472804 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171621896386 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528277249863 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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