Pterosaurs
Recently, there has been a ton of debate as to Pterosaurs. More specifically, in regards to the passages, the writer puts forth the idea that some paleontologists believed that these animals were not able to fly. In the listening passage. the lecturer is quick to point out there are some serious flaws in the writer's claims. In fact, the professor believes Pterosaurs may have been able to fly, and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the reading text.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states that Pterosaurs like modern reptiles were cold-blooded, therefore they had a slow metabolism. Some professionals in the same field, however, stand in firm opposition to this claim. In the listening, for example, the professor states that because Pterosaurs had fur or they were hair-like that will make them warmblood animals. She goes on to say that they may have need a lot of energy as well.
One group of scholars, represented by the writer, think that their bones were very heavy to be able to fly. Of course, though, not all experts in this field believe this is accurate. Again, the speaker specifically addresses this point when she states that according to their anatomic features, their bones were actually hollow, which would have possibly allowed them to be able to fly at a low height at least.
Finally, the author wraps his argument by pointing that they could not have taken off from the ground, because considering from fossilized bones, their back legs, which are the ones responsible the most of the take-off, were very small and weak. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that some studies suggest that the claim above would not be a real issue, since unlike birds, Ptesoraurs used their four legs to take off.
To sum up. both the writer and professor hold conflicting views about the ability for Ptesoraurs to fly. It is clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... able to fly. In the listening passage. the lecturer is quick to point out there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, at least, for example, in fact, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91097922849 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55719214306 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7334451642 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940989506607 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303078480553 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654801489726 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521127321624 0.162205337803 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688908344515 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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