Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Nowadays, it is common that people are engaged in doing many different things due to the fact that they want to or have to play different roles in daily lives.
So whether they could do these things well or not sparks a heated debate.
Some people contend that they would do very few things well because of limited time and energy.
Be that as it may, I hold a different opinion that they could do well if they are responsible and curious to life.
First of all, many scientists' researches cover several fields and they do considerably well in each field. Take my uncle as an example, he is a data scientist and his research includes data mining, machine learning and natural language process. He enjoys his job which brings him a sense of accomplishment. He told me that these different things could not distract him but inspire him to solve another field's problems. Hence, doing different things could help scientists hone their skills and make more achievements。
Second, a lot of CEOs are engaged in many different things ranging from finance to human resource, especially for some start-ups. We all know that it is so difficult for these small companies to survive because of fierce competitions. These CEOs or bosses need to learn and do many different things to cut down expenses and make more money. We have to admit that some of them have done a really good job even they do different things.
Last but not least is that there are so many people in our daily lives play different roles and they could do very well such as our parents. Aside from being parents, they also work hard and have many achievements in their career. Take my mother as an example, because of her responsibility, I am properly taken care of and grow up happily. Also, she has to look after her parents as they became older. More importantly, she is a professional doctor and helps many people to overcome diseases. She does a great job as all these different roles.
In conclusion, it is common and necessary for many people in our daily lives doing different kinds of things. Although life is tough, most of them try their best and do very well.
- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest that th 66
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- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest that th 3
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- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest that th 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...common that people are engaged in doing many different things due to the fact that they want t...
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Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...。 Second, a lot of CEOs are engaged in many different things ranging from finance to human re...
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Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ese CEOs or bosses need to learn and do many different things to cut down expenses and make mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, really, second, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66137566138 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52246145489 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510582010582 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2948788012 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.540233833981 0.236089414692 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163685887785 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122025744431 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29235607506 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732036322804 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.