A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (ages14-18) improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:
1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
No doubt, it is considered that teacher are the best figure in the society to convoke the theme that we are enlightened by them. But, it is a matter of great sorrow that today’s most of the teacher are not up to date to the scenario of this new world. As a result, students are facing the problem of enhancing their shear talent as teacher are based on the old modeled. Therefore it is a must to train the teachers, but at the same time it also ensure that individual training to all the teachers are inj the advancement of every teachers. That's why I wholeheartedly agree on the second statement and try to hold up some logic to substantiate it.
To embark on, in a high school, there are lot of teachers who are basically liable to teach the utmost learning to the students. Especially, it is very hard to believe that all teachers are not in the area of training which affects the atmosphere of the overall learning of the school. For instance, if 10 teachers are trained effectively and rest of the teachers are not in this view it will create a discrimination to them. Moreover, it also create a bad situation among the students. What I mean by this is that in few of the classes, students will get the best teacher no doubt, but in the rest classes, they will learn nothing. Just couple of days ago, my cousin complained me that, in his school his chemistry teacher is poor and math teacher is the best. At first I was not serious about the topic, but when I go to school,I summarized trhe view that chemistry teacher is not provided training individually which is the reason for not being capable to proivide intensive incoveniences to the students.
In addition, by training, all teachers will get a notion of how to teach the student which will work as boost to their life. For example, our sociology teacher is not well trained, especially he is not familiar with the creative system. That's why he is very in confident and invariably teaches us irrelevant topic. Moreover, new system based question is not perceived to him, which is why we don't get any indication of preparation. In this case if any online material at least was circulated to our teacher, he will be efficient to teach the student as it will work as a positive force to him.
last not least, it is well said that discrimination is disregarded in all spheres of our life. So if a teacher is kept aloof from training and not given any chance to partake in online courses, it eventually spoil his merit. In the long run, all of the students make bad sound with the name of the teacher.From my personal experience, just couple of days ago, our senior teacher tolerate bad names from the students as he is not well-efficient and at last student leave him.
To wrap it up, it is onerous to provide the solution of this open ended question. So although some may oppose my purview, it is clear that without additional teaching to the teachers individually it is very hard to materialize our inclination to be produced. Only through sharpening the memory of students can't we keep the pace of this society well, that's why we have to look on the effective online based training to every teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57267950963 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69844050348 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4588441331 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3289593501 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.52173913 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8260869565 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5652173913 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244945318074 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738481412113 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512598026913 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138422117485 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496179003066 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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