in difficult situation some people react calmy while others react with panic how to you react in different situation use specific details and example to support your answer

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... status in our lives for example in work , at home ----extra. This is hard time ne...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...it. I adopt this way in solving problem.In fact have advantage as i illustrated be...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lving problem.In fact have advantage as i illustrated below. In fact, calm down...
^
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...get alternative solution for the problem . for instant, you differ from them and t...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... alternative solution for the problem . for instant, you differ from them and take ...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... differ from them and take the best one.This is procedure require calm and patient. ...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, react with panic lead to suffer from lot of pains. Go further, people act in ...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...ple act in such manner come unfriendly, be cause they make ways that can get relationshi...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... act without panic to get the b decision . they avoid being unfriendly by used cal...
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Suggestion: They
...t without panic to get the b decision . they avoid being unfriendly by used calm res...
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Suggestion: They
...being unfriendly by used calm response. they will not loss money and position when s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 1977.66487455 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49050630003 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725490196078 0.524837075471 138% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1606409147 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4545454545 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14161335395 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508168766928 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524949656161 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777065346091 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315344325878 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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