some people prefer large wedding with lots of people while others prefer small wedding with only very close friends and family discuss the advantages of each type of wedding there indicate which you prefer and why

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Marriage celebrates in small or big wedd...
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Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
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...ge celebrates in small or big weddings. While many young people prefer to have a larg...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...many young people prefer to have a large events others views totake small one.The...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Thereof
...e events others views totake small one.Thereof, either economic purpose or plan holid...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s views totake small one.Thereof, either economic purpose or plan holidays . I ag...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ither economic purpose or plan holidays . I agree with second views which purpose...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...iews which purpose have a small ceremony and save money to spend a long days in v...
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...money to spend a long days in vacancy. when starting family young people plan ...
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Suggestion: When
...o spend a long days in vacancy. when starting family young people plan for ...
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...in vacancy. when starting family young people plan for their marriage day...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...days, they decide to do not have a party . According to them, make a party in a ...
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...e to do not have a party . According to them, make a party in a reputable hotels...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hotel'?
Suggestion: hotel
...g to them, make a party in a reputable hotels, invite many family , friend , everyone...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
...e a party in a reputable hotels, invite many family , friend , everyone known are very expe...
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...n a reputable hotels, invite many family , friend , everyone known are very expens...
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...able hotels, invite many family , friend , everyone known are very expensive in ou...
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... known are very expensive in our present time. Therefore , they can not afford to...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...xpensive in our present time. Therefore , they can not afford to pay it. However,...
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...ost is not only the main reason for this choose but few people who are able to ex...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest spending'.
Suggestion: suggest spending
...are able to expand money in huge hotels suggest to spend money in holidays in lieu to have a we...
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...ggest to spend money in holidays in lieu to have a wedding party. ...
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...ys in lieu to have a wedding party. beside higher cost of ...
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Suggestion: Beside
... wedding party. beside higher cost of wedding days , some peop...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... beside higher cost of wedding days , some people hope to have a happy honeym...
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Suggestion: They
... people hope to have a happy honeymoon. they desire to travel abroad and enjoy their...
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Suggestion: .
...ite to spend their money on marriage day . According to this suggest, young coupl...
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...arriage day . According to this suggest, young couple go to airplane to fly abroa...
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...fter finished the marriage procedure In conclusion, having ...
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... small weddings depend on party cost and honeymoon plan.lastly , I prefer to spen...
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Suggestion: ,
...rty cost and honeymoon plan.lastly , I prefer to spend less amount in prepar...
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...for a happy honeymoon taken many days. .
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...ken many days. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88340807175 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36725064041 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.4510752525 48.9658058833 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193154218577 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067734890238 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614738961293 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119826665575 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041172584103 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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