do some people like to spend time alone when relaxing
Having a glimpse of the working situation around the world, we will be marveled at how fast employees working around. Most of them are too busy to spending time relaxing. Undeniably, it is reasonable for every original people in this modern society to seize the opportunity to relax themselves. Recently, a proposal was brought to public eye, suggesting that when relaxing, some people like to spend time alone. From my point of view, I cannot agree with it more.
To begin with, spending time alone is the best way to get oneself relax. To illustrate, imagine some white-collar worker spends the whole day on commuting, having meals, busily dealing with clients as well as handling all kinds of errands. After work, he or she would drive home directly and lying on the sofa for a long while. It is a great chance for him or her who are too tired to talk or relate with someone else to spend time alone and relax, letting alone those annoying stuff and troubles encountered during the day. Evidently, the last thing a tired white-collar wishes to happen is witnessing others knocking the door and breaking the precious atmosphere that only exists when one relaxes alone. Therefore, spending time alone is a good idea for workers to relax themselves.
Furthermore, spending time alone also helps study efficiently, which constitutes a stepping-stone for a student towards a bright future. In a sense, as a common economic law denotes, the payoff is not always compared with the efforts, there is a point no matter how hard a student study, he or she can by no means finishing the assignments and research papers with high efficiency. As a result, but for taking some time relaxing, never would an exhausted student study efficiently. Take me as an example. When I was in high school, the daily homework exerts so much burden on me that I could not handle it easily and I always stayed up late in order to finish it. For the purpose of relaxing and refreshing myself, I used to spend time sitting on the desk alone and enjoy the moment that no one would interrupt my thinking. Later on, I could get back to study with a brand new and refreshed mind. Needless to say, those memories are the best things that I would cherish forever.
Admittedly, spending time alone is not always applicable and suitable for everyone. Everyone has his or her own way to relax himself or herself. After all, no one could deprive others of the fundamental right to relax.
To sum up, the merits encompassed within spending time alone are countless. Concerning all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe, spending time alone is a good way to relax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'wish'?
Suggestion: wish
...ly, the last thing a tired white-collar wishes to happen is witnessing others knocking...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, well, while, after all, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77223427332 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60286875813 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559652928416 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0192105274 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2083333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404105302947 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112862783471 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102487123103 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239256742994 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568684680516 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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