land used for shopping mall or performance art center or hotel
We have entered on the era where business becomes an integral part of the modern society. Shopping centers, restaurants and local television stations as well as banks are extremely important in daily life of inhabitants in my community. There is no denying that having a business in my community is good idea. However, some people prefer a performing art center to enjoy paintings while some prefer a hotel to make profits. From my point of view, to build a shopping mall on this piece of land is the best choice.
To begin with, a shopping mall provides considerable number of jobs, which improves the quality of life of neighbors in my community. To illustrate, my hometown desperately needs the jobs that a shopping mall could offer. It has been in a poor economic state since the economic crisis occurred in 2008, which gave rise to poverty, famine and poor public service in my community. A shopping mall is able to provide hundreds of jobs, including cashiers, plumbers, accounts and managers. Hence, the unemployment rate will drop and the income of natives will increase, which provides them an opportunity to spend more on clothing, education and habits. In contrast, neither of a performing art center or a hotel could provide jobs as many as a shopping mall does.
Furthermore, life will be more convenient with a shopping mall around. To clarify, the quality of life depends a wide variety of goods. Food and water is the most important resource can be found in a mall while electronics, for instance, computers, are essential for entertainment. Unfortunately, there is no local mall in my community. People who live in my community have to drive 30 miles to another town in order to purchase what they needs. If a shopping mall is erected nearby, life will be much more convenient. On the contrary, those two business cannot provides such convenience.
Admitted, even though there will be more noise and traffic when the shopping mall move into town, many people think it is an acceptable trade-off for the decline of unemployment and crimes occurs at the same time.
To conclude, the merits encompassed within erecting a shopping mall outweighs those in building a performing art center or a hotel for the reason that a shopping center provides more jobs and makes daily life convenient. Considering all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe that this piece of land should be used for a shopping mall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...her town in order to purchase what they needs. If a shopping mall is erected nearby, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in contrast, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93704600484 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78256801868 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513317191283 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6477193923 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0952380952 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401171435031 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111252177702 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117457478378 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235734145933 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140348154105 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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