Do you agree or disagree a aperson should get a knowledge in many subjects than in one specific subject while studying in college
Explain with examples and details.
After finishing high school students are usually confused to choose a specific field in a college. Some students decide to get a college education in a specific field while others choose to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects. In my opinion, one should finish college education in a specific field which is good for a future career, further research work, and development.
First of all, when a student decided to have higher education in a specific subject, chances of having a better career is more than one who finishes college education in a variety of subjects. For example, after finishing a high school I decided to join a pharmacy school, but my friend was confused to choose a major, so he decided to have broad knowledge in many academic subjects. When we finished our education, I was a licence Pharmacist and started working in my field right away because during my internship hours in a pharmaceutical company I got a job offer which I gladly accepted. However, my friend was still struggling because he didn’t have enough knowledge in one specific field to work.
Second, when one finishes his college education in one specific field, he/she can do research work or can further higher education in that specific field which can increase more opportunities to have a successful life. For example, one of my school friends decided to be a doctor and was able to get admission in medical school. When he finished his education, and after working a couple of years in his field he wanted to do fellowship in cardiology. After finishing his fellowship, he was a cardiologist. Now he has rewarding and respected job in his field.
Finally, one can easily focus and able to achieve good grades in college if he decides to have a specific field of study because all the subjects in that particular field are related to each other. For example, when I choose to get admission in a pharmacy school, all the subjects during college years were related to the pharmacy major. I already had an interest to get brad education in that field so I was able to be more focused towards my study and was able to achieve higher scores.
In conclusion, one can have a broad knowledge in many subjects by using an internet, reading books or joining groups. However, for college education, a person should choose a particular field because finishing education in a specific field is good for future career, further research work, and is more rewarding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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After finishing high school students are usua...
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...n a college. Some students decide to get a college education in a specific field ...
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...subjects. For example, after finishing a high school I decided to join a pharmacy...
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Suggestion: broad knowledge
...cores. In conclusion, one can have a broad knowledge in many subjects by using an internet, ...
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...h work, and is more rewarding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91923990499 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74648834773 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394299287411 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2629411449 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.823529412 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158845458338 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665155079972 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490709060278 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113920798235 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246393699129 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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