Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university.
Today, knowledge and science play an vital role in human life for different are such as work and personal life. Humankind pat attention more and more to education for every stratum of society. University is one of best place to learn plenty and a wide range of knowledge that everyone want to learn and use it for their professional caree. The governemt should invest on university facility, equipement and knowledgable of their faculty to prepeare their best efficincy and effect for treat and educate of next generation of people to make their society and community. I completely agree with this statement that everyone should have a break for nearly one year to prepare for university. I am going to elaborate my perspective for following reasons that follows.
Firstly, the finanical acpect of every object is one the most critical aspect that not inevitable to not concern. One of best destination for college education is USA that attract a lot of student around the world. Unfortunatly, The almost of university not only private university but also state univnersity have great tuition to pay by studnets or their family. I believe that a clever student maybe want to prepare for this financial proplem by finding a job before entering to university. For example, when I want to enter for master degree my family did not have decent money for support me but I had to work to provide some part of budget for my education. finally, I think it is difficult for me to work but I can get my self-confidnece and dignity that are very invaluable for me.
Secondly, I am believing that taking a job before entering to university is better for everyone to prepare for their future work.
I think job broaden my horizon to my professional career that I can select my way or path to follow for future. Moreover, I can build my perspective and resume or develop my path that noticed former in the unniversity. My mind is very prepeare to select the knowledge I maybe need for my career in different course and workshop during my education. The university is a best place to learn different subject from basic to advanced form that will shape my mind for work and be a creative entrepreneour at fusture.
finally, I think everyone needs a little time to be free from stricted roleds for education after high school. because in the university student must have a lot of assignment and progect duirng a semester. It is better for student to have some entertainment and joy to release their tenstion and stress for study. Graduated high-school can refreash their mind by doing interest hobby, sport or others during this time.
In conclusion, I definietly agree that student needs a break before entering to university and built and prepare their mind for upper education in the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Today, knowledge and science play an vital role in human life for different ...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...y stratum of society. University is one of best place to learn plenty and a wide range ...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...that not inevitable to not concern. One of best destination for college education is US...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of students'.
Suggestion: a lot of students
...r college education is USA that attract a lot of student around the world. Unfortunatly, The alm...
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Line 2, column 663, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...e some part of budget for my education. finally, I think it is difficult for me to work...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...re very invaluable for me. Secondly, I am believing that taking a job before entering to un...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... during my education. The university is a best place to learn different subject f...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... a creative entrepreneour at fusture. finally, I think everyone needs a little time t...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...roleds for education after high school. because in the university student must have a l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84696016771 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77675785239 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3220263192 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6818181818 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127237540475 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454436135388 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401823288204 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832191376954 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266327956167 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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