do you agree or disagree with the following statement. always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people . Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Many traits found in the human being that contributed to the solidarity and the maintenance of the relationships. One of these traits is honesty. I believe it is controversial whether to consider honesty is the backbone in relations between people or just one of the characteristic that aids in continuity. I primarily do not agree with the statement that said always telling the truth is the most crucial consideration in any relationship between people. A point of view with personal reasons that i will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, telling the truth do not have to be at all the times and in all situations. However, some situations requires flexibility- or what we so-called a white lie- to keep the situation contained and, not to raise an issue of a minor thing. For example, when i was in my last year of college , five years ago, i had an argument with my close friend at that time and we weren't talk to each other for a while. Our friend came to me and told me that Janna committed an accident and she was hurt badly so, without a second thought i went to see my friend as i was so concerned and when i reached to the hospital she was there too thinking the same about me. tat was the time when we concealed our grudge and return back to our friendship. The funny thing is, instead of being angry on our friend who told the lie, we were very thankful for his help that made us getting together again. It was for a good purpose and the yield was satisfying for everyone.
Second, of course being honest in the critical cases is an urge, nevertheless, there are some exceptions in these cases too. eight years ago, my uncle was in his last stage of lung cancer and he required a palliative care to prepare him for his definite destiny. The doctors said he would die in a week. So our family took the decision not to inform him with that unavoidable end and keep him out of pain- by administering the painkillers. keeping him relaxed so he could die peacefully and in the middle of his beloved ones. It was a nerve wracking and very emotional experience.
finally, being honest is the key for a good, contained and firm relationship, if it was flexible not extreme. Sometimes the truth might hurt the ones we love. So keeping the relationship may depend on the dishonesty sometimes. It is never black or white as there is grey in between.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, while, as for, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5150812065 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68904177073 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542923433875 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1527650465 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4545454545 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117335679742 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399461180792 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935157933303 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975189869222 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106500588722 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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