Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Always telling the truth in any relationship is really the most important consideration for
many reasons. I could say that when you lie to someone, this person will not trust you
anymore and what is a relationship based on? Trust, confidence, so the sense of relation-
ship is being lost. Another point is that if the true is ommited once, it will surely appear
sometime, somewhere and probably in the most unexpected way, causing lots of prob-
lems for the ones involved. So, the truth is the basis for everything.
First, confidence is the most important aspect of a friendship or a marriage, or any-
thing like that, so, once it is lost, the whole thing goes down in a way that no one can
bear it. To avoid losing confidence, there is only one way, telling the truth, lying will just
help throwing it away. For example, a couple decided to go out on the weekend, but the
man has a party to go with his friends to where he can not take his girlfriend and then
he lies to her saying that he is sick and can not go to the date. She undertands him and
they do not see each other in that weekend, but he goes to the party and has much fun.
Suppose on monday, the girl talks to a friend that saw him at the party and asked why
did not she go with him. She found out the true and all confidence was lost, the basis for
their relation is now gone and what happens next is that they break up or if they do not,
he will persist on lyes and someday it will end.
What happened to this couple is very common around here and many relationships,
even friends and marriages end because of something like that. Some may argue that
lying once or another will not interfere anything and it is part of a relation, but I strongly
disagree, the most important thing is the true, even if it is to determine the end of a rela-
tion, it must be told. There are more chances to end something lying than saying what
really happened
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...thing goes down in a way that no one can bear it. To avoid losing confidence, the...
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... way, telling the truth, lying will just help throwing it away. For example, a co...
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...lling the truth, lying will just help throwing it away. For example, a couple decided ...
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...ecided to go out on the weekend, but the man has a party to go with his friends t...
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...t go to the date. She undertands him and they do not see each other in that weeke...
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... that saw him at the party and asked why did not she go with him. She found out t...
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...something like that. Some may argue that lying once or another will not interfere...
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... to end something lying than saying what really happened
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34520547945 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31822917904 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523287671233 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2207708921 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.53405017921 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176117774191 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680162513335 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105086933845 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536380764899 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104424597728 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.