Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons ans examples to support your answer.
It is a difficult question to answer because it depends on each person, society, trends, and demands, but totally agree with that statement and I believe that it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize in such complex societies. I hold this view because of several reasons.
According to my point of view, in such fast-paced modernized societies, by developing technology, living conditions are getting harder and harder. In other words, communities are becoming more complex and life circumstances are constantly changing, so, people should do more effort than past to achieve success. One of those efforts that I have mentioned is the ability of managing and organizing various aspects of life, which means people should improve their knowledge and gain more experinces by puting themselves in different positions to obtain that ability. For instance, one's should know how to deal with several economical issues such as inflation in order to cope with that problem. He can read several articles and books to get informed of what is happening around the world and how different societies resolve inflation. If one's does not care about ability of planning and organizing inflation, he will face to failure in his personal life.
Moreover, being able for planning a good scheme for a certain goal is crucial for today's generation because people, specifically youth, should know how to manage their problem in order to choose the best solution. First step of planing a good scheme is identifying a problem, which is the most important step. By recognizing the dilemma, individuals can understand which kind of solution is more beneficial for them. Next step is applying that solution, which is difficult in our societies because it requires a lot of money and plenty of time. Therefore, by implementing those steps, we can expect a good result due to manage our problem.
In general, it seems to me that although in our complicated societies it is more difficult to cope with several issues, but people should try more than before to increase their creativity and productivity, so that they can gain success and secure their future career.
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- TPO 47 integrated writing skill 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubts on specific points made in the reading passage 60
- TPO 36 integrated writing skill 70
- TPO 31 independent writing skill 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erson, society, trends, and demands, but totally agree with that statement and I ...
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Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...es should know how to deal with several economical issues such as inflation in order to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in general, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08403361345 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73906614493 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3574504068 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221332856292 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706563550777 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877090541834 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145817274875 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112549781986 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.