Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where people are putting all their efforts to have an enjoyable life, traveling would be one of the best ways. No one can deny the effect of traveling on people’s lives. One of the contentious issues having been brought up recently is whether traveling by tour is better or traveling alone. Some people hold the view that traveling by their own is more enjoyable as they do not have to pursue some restricted instructions made by leaders. However, the majority of people contradict this outlook and look at this concept through a different lens. As a matter of fact, I subscribe to the view of those people since I contend that traveling by group is more beneficial. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into some conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my point of view.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that going on trip is a good opportunity to socialize with other people and make more friends. No one can cast the shadow on the fact that by traveling, people can get more knowledge and information as much as being familiar with other people’s attitudes and manners. An example can shed light on this concept. Take for example a group of people who are supposed to travel led by a tour. At first, nobody knows the others. After a while they will start talking together and say their comments about the place to go and other needed speech. Besides, by being together, it is more likely to solve the probable problems during the trip. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligent statistic revealed in our country, indicates that individuals not only do not enjoy their trips while they are in a journey but also they may be depressed rather than the time they settled at home because they are not mentally refreshed which is gained by social activities such as attending in groups and socializing by others. Some scholar from all over the world contend that group traveling makes people’s soul feel live and refresh. So they established an experiment program to estimate the effect of travel on psychological behavior of people. The results were surprising: over 90 percent of people who attend group trips led by leaders have better balance in their social behaviors.
Another subtle point which deserves some words here is that tours are more scheduled and they have delicate programs for every second of traveling so as people enjoy trip and not waste their money and time. To illustrate, all tours have a specific schedule and all expenses are clear in order to meet the expectation of people. For instance, I was in a tour trip last month. Initially, I thought it would be so costly for me to go on a tour. But when I saw their fees and expenses, I recognized it is more cost and time effective. I could go to new places and experience new things with less budget. There has been a great deal of research into the potential benefits of tours showing that nowadays people are more likely to attend this tours owing to the increase amount of money to be spent on traveling alone. The more traveling on tour, the more leisure people have.
To put it briefly, contemplating all factors and reasons one soon realizes that traveling by group of people is more interesting and leads people to have a better trip since they can make friends and experience more with less money that they have expected. Consequently, I firmly recommend people to travel by tours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2859.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 598.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78093645485 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65327498053 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481605351171 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 894.6 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1007746305 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.107142857 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142312709911 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477545653742 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405983459425 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992108169451 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00950685946718 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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