Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone undoubtedly knows that travelling is an important part of our lives. In part because occasionally we need to stop working and get some rest. But sometimes when we have a plan for a trip, it is always difficult choice to determine the type of travelling. Actually there are basically two common types of travelling which are called solo travelling and tour travelling. Some people I am sure would believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide; others would disagree. In my opinion, there are several benefits which I will explore two main reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, people feel safety when they travel by a group. Actually From my own point of view, this is the most important reason. What I mean they don’t any stress about stealing their money by a bad people. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I still remember when I decided to go to travel to a foreign country after a long time. I went to the tour agency and enrolled for Turkey tour. On vacation, we met many touristic places and historical buildings in many cities of Turkey such as Ankara and Istanbul. I still remember when the thief stole the purse of alone tourist woman and run away quickly. After the tour, when I became close to tourist woman, she was looking very sad and she expressed her regret about her solo travelling. As you can see, group traveling is a good idea duo to our safety.
Another reason is that we learn more thing about cultures and customs when we go to travel by a tour with the leadership of tour guide. It noteworthy that when we ask some questions about everything, the tour leader answers the question easily. My own experience demonstrates when I went to travel alone two years ago, I have many unanswered questions that they bothered me to the end of vacation. What I mean I didn’t understand many behaviors of people and their customs. This experience taught me that group travel by a tour guide is very pleasant.
All in all, though we might lose some freedom by staying in a group with a tour guide, this way of travelling still can be the best. Under this circumstance, I want to state that not only people feel safety but also they learn more things about the cultures and the customs. To conclude, I strongly recommend everyone to be aware that a group tour is a good idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, still, i mean, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56941176471 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5361060526 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510588235294 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3837786225 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7083333333 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207307253649 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598323562303 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597986499461 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135075940387 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188583075838 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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