Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone undoubtedly knows that the advertisements are an important part of each business. In part because the advertisement causes to bold products of companies and popularity of them. Recently, with the development of technology and the emergence of hard competition between big companies, we notice that variety of advertisements is increasing on all of the regions such as cyberspace and TV. With this in mind, a controversy exists on whether the advertisements give the real information about the products or not. Some people I am sure would believe that the advertisement make products seem much better than they really are; others would disagree. In my opinion, advertising helps the products to seem much better and there are several points which I will explore two main reasons in the following essay.
First and foremost, sometimes companies exploit some specific advertisements in which tend to exaggerate about their products and accordingly, people obtain some incorrect information. What I mean they deceive the people's minds. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I decided to buy a refrigerator for my home two years ago. I still remember when I was watching the television advertisement so that I immediately choose it because of the deceiving advertisement. Then, I offered it from online market. When it is brought to my home, I understood that it was more small and less space than the one that I watch on television. As you can see, group traveling is a good idea duo to our safety.
Another reason is that companies are became more popular by good advertisements. It noteworthy that when something repeats several times at many days, it causes seem well even it doesn’t so much well. Companies also exploit celebrities and popular artist. My own experience demonstrates when I want to eat some food, I choose the one that is advertised more times and by the popular celebrities. This experience taught me that repeatedly advertisement is great idea to persuade people that their products is really good.
All in all, though the deceiving advertisements may show the success of company for people, this types of advertisements eventually destroys the people trust. Under this circumstance, I want to state that the deceiving advertisements not only exaggerate about the products but also companies are became more popular even by a bad way. To conclude, I strongly recommend everyone to be aware of this kinds of advertisements when they have a plan to buy a product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... Another reason is that companies are became more popular by good advertisements. It...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...out the products but also companies are became more popular even by a bad way. To conc...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ongly recommend everyone to be aware of this kinds of advertisements when they have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, really, so, still, then, well, i mean, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15365853659 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16715464268 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529268292683 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8588746368 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0454545455 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216087646616 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593863901901 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608537430206 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133054101917 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083992807088 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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