Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The family are always been the most important individual we have. Moreover, they are the present the pace, love, care and, the support. I personely, agree that in this fast modern era of the world, the people who are relative to our parents are rare to be seen. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, this time with the increase the demand of life and to improve it's quality, we force to shift to other cities or maybe to overses countries in order to get a proper job or education. My personal experience is compelling for this. About ten years ago, I lived with my grandparents I had to let them behaind mein order to complete my education. Moreover, this had a direct effect on my relationship toward them. In fact, i couldn't reach them and communitate with them as before.
Secondly, the great inovation which is internet and cellphone make this concept so true. The new technology makes the communication from a far-distance place more easy then previous time. To illustrate, if want to speak to your cousins; for example, to wish him best luck for his marriage then you only requiar to call instead of travle all the way to attened. Therfore, the revoluation replace the habits of becoming togather and reduceses the important of been with the extended families.
Finally, this behavior seems to be rapdily widespread throughout the society, but its may due to the problem's from them which are mainly the repated involvment for our personal life. For instance, some aunts or uncles feels that they have the privilge to step-in their sisters son by the name of make them more discipline. This attitude forece the youngs avoid any contact from them to protect them self from unwanted opinions.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that nowday's we become more far from the people whom close to our parents. This is because differents reasons, such as: seeking the jops or education across the country , due the invented social program and some of un exceptable mannar that some realtiaves have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55491327607 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.415672772 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3888888889 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923969398409 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293207845536 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279719436051 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503279126564 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211301931038 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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