Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Job selecting is one of the most important proccess that adult human encounter it. Finding a good job is create stressful condition. In this ways, there is possible to be created a condition in that a person who look for job is offered a job that he/she don't want to continue his/her work in that field. The materials is still on the debate is whether he/she should refuse that offer and wait for future to have a better offer or accept it. There may seem to be conrovorsy at first glance. Some people believe that he/she should accept because they will not find their ideal work in future, or it be a little chance; while others hold the colliding viewpoint. I firmly bleieve that he/she must refuse the job in which he/she will not be convinient. There are several advantages to this view, and in this essay, I will elaborate on two of my most important reasons.
The first and most importnant reason is that the job enivroment will affect another aspects of human life. If a person have a job in which he/she feel delight, he/she can sense satifaction from whole his/her life. Also, he/she can distribute his/her beatifull sense in his/her close relations. Hence, they will have strong and beter relations.
The second noteworthy point I want to mention is, by having job in which people exprience saticfaction feel, they can show more their talents in their work. If a person boring from his/her work, he/she can't exihibit his/her talent even he/she has a good opportunity to disclose them. On the other hand, the one who thinks he/she is here in the right position, always will try to reveal his/her abilities.
In sum, I firmly believe that in the proccess of job finding, people should wait for a job in which they have delight sense. There are some reasons leading me to this view, chief amongst them is the job enviromant will have influential impact on the other facets of life. Aside from this reason, people can show more their talents in job in which they feel convinient in them. So I advice people who looking job to be patient to find the best one for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d job is create stressful condition. In this ways, there is possible to be created a...
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Suggestion: don't
...ok for job is offered a job that he/she dont want to continue his/her work in that f...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...s/her work in that field. The materials is still on the debate is whether he/she s...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...use they will not find their ideal work in future, or it be a little chance; while others...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... find their ideal work in future, or it be a little chance; while others hold the ...
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
... If a person have a job in which he/she feel delight, he/she can sense satifaction f...
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...person boring from his/her work, he/she cant exihibit his/her talent even he/she has...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
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...person boring from his/her work, he/she cant exihibit his/her talent even he/she has...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'try'.
Suggestion: will always try
...s he/she is here in the right position, always will try to reveal his/her abilities. In sum,...
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...hich they feel convinient in them. So I advice people who looking job to be patient to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64498644986 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33367166875 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474254742547 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1441006154 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2105263158 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195158173861 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780645381835 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057702912392 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140214850895 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739950505948 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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