Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is the passport for the future, for tomorrow belongs to those who prepare it today. No doubt, there are positive and negative aspects of increasing the salaries for university professors. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely propose to raise a salary level for college professors. I had a firm belief that professor's salaries should be improved for several reasons, and would develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, increment in professor's salaries would attract more qualified lecturers to join Universities. Generally, due to poor salary structure, the students, who attend the Ivy college league do not join educational institutes. Furthermore, bright students prefer multinational companies, who pay far better salary packages as compared to Universities. As a result, the quality of research and education level decreases over time. I must say that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. For example, six years ago, I recieved an opportunity to work as an assitant professor for Economics after graduation from a renowned technical univeristy in Munich. However, the package offered by the college was around three thousand dollar which was relatively lower than a salary level offered by other corporates. Consequently, I did not join the referred position of assistant professor and looked for other place for work. As we can see from this example, the increment in lecturer's salary would surely attract more qualified people to join colleges.
Secondly, the lecturers teaching in Universities will be motivated upon improvement in their salaries. It is undeniable that professors teaching in Universities also need to send their children to better institutes, which needs significant amount of fees. Furthermore, any individual work to achieve comfortable life, including a house in a city, a sedan car, minimum bank balance etc. for himself as well as for his family. Hence, better salaries would motivate lecturers to pur more efforts in the lectures. Drawing from my brother's experience, he is teaching in a college named University of Stuttgart since last ten years. But, his salary level is still lower than his friends, who are working for private companies. Due to which, he not critisise his college but also does not put additional efforts to improve student's grade. For this reason, University should improve a salary level for their lecturers
In view of mentioned reasons, I would firmly recommend to enhance salary packages for lecturers because the increment not only attract more talented professors but also boost the motivation level of existing lecturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, as for, for example, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4019138756 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94274710715 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555023923445 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8560168329 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.636363636 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232744247849 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705216802584 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462012530799 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147838908142 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427895416417 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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