Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? It Is Better To Be A Member Of A Group Than To Be The Leader Of A Group. Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer
The ability to perform well with a "team" plays a pivotal role in enhancing one's personality. There can be different roles in a team, sometimes it can be a group member and sometimes a group leader. In my opinion, to be the leader of the group is better than to be a group member. I feel this way for two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
The first exquisite point to be mention is that leadership position helps in our personal growth. Personal growth in terms of skills like decision making skills, communication skills, inter-personal skills etc. Indeed, group members are the building blocks of a team, and without them there is no existence of a team. But as far as the duties and responsibilities are concerned, there is always a comparatively better scope at leadership positions.
My own experience is a very good example for that. When I was doing my masters in public health, I was the team lead of field trips to public health centers of villages. To play my role effectively I had to communicate with various state, district and village authorities to make the visits successful. I had to plan the whole trip, prepare check lists etc. As a result the experience of these kinds of work created a much advanced personality of myself.
Another reason which deserves some words is that is it helps in your professional growth. When some have handled the leadership roles, it opens up the gate of many leadership job opportunities to them. As I said above, I made an advanced personality of myself by working at leadership positions. This is what the employers demand, when they look of employees of the organisation. For example, once my brother applied for a leadership position in a multi-national company. He easily got that position while others did not, because he had the experience of leadership roles in many other organisations. Hence, he could make it to get his dream job, with good position and great salary package.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that to be a leader of the group is better than to be a group member. This is because in not only helps in you personal growth but also proliferates your professional growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The ability to perform well with a 'team' plays a pivotal role i...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...apos; plays a pivotal role in enhancing ones personality. There can be different rol...
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Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun leadership seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much leadership', 'a good deal of leadership'.
Suggestion: much leadership; a good deal of leadership
...adership roles, it opens up the gate of many leadership job opportunities to them. As I said ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81167108753 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98441377498 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53050397878 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.596728056 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266804401091 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778677718681 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135092181969 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17260991992 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152693708482 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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