Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? It Is Better To Be A Member Of A Group Than To Be The Leader Of A Group. Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer
A leader is a vital part of any community or a group as he/she has a major responsibility to lead a team in a proper direction. The leader becomes a link with keeps all members of a team together. Some people may prefer to become a member of a team and others disagree. However, from my vintage point, it is better to be the leader of a group for the following significant reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that a leader has more opportunity to learn and to get new experiences. Indeed, being a leader’s job is not like a piece of a cake, though it gives a chance to use your inner ability to handle situation in own way. Sometime a leader doesn’t listen other group member’s point of view, at the time being a just follower is not an ideal choice. With the help of a leadership, one can to face new challenges, ventures in life and can get vast knowledge from that scenario. In order to become a good leader, we must have to evolve special features like being cool, calm, active listener, honesty and friendliness. All of these, one can adapt over a time, so being a leader is the best way to do so.
Another reason that deserves some words is that a leader has the power to make final decision. We often see debates in a team in order to reach final conclusion, sometime it’s not favorable to us. A leader has an advantage take action as per own believes. Apparently, it’s an art to come forward and to make others to follow your thoughts. A member of team has no right to share his opinion in most of the situation. In a critical scenario like a natural disaster, it is not best to follow someone blindly as it may end up losing our life while being a leader you can take several approaches.
Thirdly, a leader has ability to get a fame and name in the society. All members of the team recognize by the name of a leader, they do not have their own identity. Doubtlessly, a leader has a golden opportunity to accept a trophy and to give a speech. In the community, a leader gets rights to interact with high authorities and rich people, so a leader has more incentive compare to followers. For instance, we all remember Gandhi as a person who gave freedom to India, and people respect him as a god, however, no one remembers other people who sacrificed their life for India’s victory. Hence, a leader becomes a prestigious and an honorable person in a group.
In the conclusion, to get all advantages like to make a final decision, to learn more and to get fame in a life, I would firmly prefer to become a leader than being a follower.
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- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: VINTAGE_POINT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'vantage point'?
Suggestion: vantage point
...m and others disagree. However, from my vintage point, it is better to be the leader of a gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44351464435 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72890609038 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479079497908 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0695314517 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.347826087 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7826086957 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274313003076 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810765776213 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551040702882 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157233875652 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571769167855 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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