Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone wants to live an easy and comfortable life. In today's technology eccentric world, people have addictive of living a comfortable life. Hence, I do agree that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was at the times of our grandparents. I feel this way for two main reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people in earlier days were far more active and hard working than the people of these days. They used to rigorous work to earn their living. As we all know technology was not that advanced that time as it is today. For instance, they had to travel long distances by walk, transportation vehicles were not that common at that time. There were no mobile phones on internet facilities available which makes our daily activities far more easier. I remember, my grandfather used to tell me that to send a mail or letter to a far person, he had to first post it in the post office and then it took around fifteen to twenty days to reach to the person. On the other hand, we have plenty of sources communication sources like e-mails, SMS, video calls, phone calls etc, which are just a finger tip away from us.
Furthermore, people in old days want to work by their own in order to keep themselves healthy and fit, but now things are changed people totally rely on machines to do their work. Even they have developed machines to do exercises, to keep themselves fit. With the advancement in the field of robotics and machinery, people have now become "slaves of machine". For example, people can not live without their mobile or car even a single day. Even though, people are dependent on cooked food or easy to cook food available in market. However, in previous days, they used to cook the food with pure raw materials.
In addition to above points, some people may think that life in earlier days were more easy because they did not have much tensions and stress in life. Even though they had less amenities but the life was much more happier than today's life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that life is much easier and comfortable today than it was when your grandparents were children. This is because liked to do there work by their own in order to keep themselves fit and healthy and technology was not that advanced during these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...le which makes our daily activities far more easier. I remember, my grandfather used to tel...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ere more easy because they did not have much tensions and stress in life. Even thoug...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun amenities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nd stress in life. Even though they had less amenities but the life was much more ha...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ad less amenities but the life was much more happier than todays life. In conclusion, I s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65196078431 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5131096107 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9922209912 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.380952381 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229617329943 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075841160872 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104933740713 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160453647668 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957532360126 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.