Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The internet is very important in our society. it often determines level of success. Some people belive that using of the internet is better than using of printed material to do research. others hold the opposite view. In my view, the internet is more useful to do research for two important reasons.
The first reason is the internet is accessible easily to do research. when you use the internet, you can get more information about. Therefore, researchs will be more comprehensive and faster. For example, in the past time, a few researcher accessed to the internet, so the science grew very slowly. they use printed material such as books to extend any subject throughout the world. As over time, because the internet develope in all over the world, scholars could share everything learning in their experiments. Fortunately, the internet have a lot of website about anything only in a few seconds. As you can see, the internet is useful to do research.
second is researchers can help each together. If you have the problem in your research, you can get help from other people by using the internet easily. Thus, the internet would accelerate science growth. For instance, when researchers study in s special field, they may run into a lot of issue. Luckily, nowadays there are many way to settle these problems. The best way is to use the internet because all people in the world access to it, and also they have contact with each other conveniently. they can request from people to solve they problems. This clearly demonstrate that using the internet is beneficial to do research.
In sum, the internet is better than printed materials. Not only does the internet is accessible, but also is helpful to fix the problem. We should all use internet to develope faster our knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92763157895 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65737358101 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3795341248 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.4166666667 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386179706012 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122579991231 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128685735574 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260491705436 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687109233371 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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