Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
education is one of the most important issues that one has to pay attention to. With passing the time from long years ago until now many things have changed to enhance the education process. Although some people think that now educating children is harder because of the advent of new technologies, I believe that it has eased the way for them to learn their materials. I think so for a couple of reasons, which I will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
The first point I want to make is that the appearance of new technologies not only does not make children's educating difficult task but also helps them to pass this process better than ever. To clarify, smartphones made class material available for students wherever they are and whenever they want. For instance, my nephew now is at elementary school and he has all of the lessons on his cellphone, which makes it possible for him to use it every time he wants. moreover, because phone programs are attracting, children tend to study their lessons more passionately. Furthermore, some elementary schools use games to teach children different materials. this can hasten the process of their learning since it seems amazing to them and as a result of that, they tend to spend more time learning by those online games. Consequently, new technologies have a strong effect on students educating.
The other reason which has to be considered is the fact that nowadays the family has a strong control over children's behavior, whereas in the past educating children was not so important for parents. To clarify, they are always in contact with school teachers and control the education of their children, for example, by asking their grades and so on. To illustrate, if a child tries to use social networking web site excessively and does not pay attention to his lesson his parents will try to put a prohibition on web site surfing. Thus, they can control educating their children in this way. moreover, family can encourage their child to study more to be able to compete with his classmates. For example, they can give him advice that if he uses online games or cell phone it can prevent him from becoming successful in his future life.
In summary, we can conclude that educating children now is not difficult even though they tend to use cellphones or online games more than before. In fact, today, education policy is to make new technologies an opportunity to learn better not to waste children's time. Additionally, parents are careful about their child's education in comparison with the past. These two reasons sufficiently corroborates my point of view.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97742663657 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71240918804 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501128668172 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9290402214 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159584240874 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507796643408 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309033025495 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102447649394 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275424771323 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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